This had been building inside and like a bad stomach ache, it had to come out…
Atlas
It came way to early
too damn hard and fast
Like a runaway freight train
then the die was cast
With rain and the wind…
like a hurricane on land
then it got nasty and pulled a knife
it played it’s final hand
Over two frozen feet
wicked, wet driving snow
with the wicked, wretched wind?
Lord how it can blow..
a mile a minute grunting gusts
icy white frozen shot
pellets peppered everything
like the fury’s double ought
wooden matchstick powerline poles
snapped off and splintered dead
in its white wake, dark and gloom
despair, regret and dread
And it’s only October 4th?
Hell, it’s hardly Fall
Rain? Sure.. but a blizzard?
it might just kill them all!
Then came the aftermath
tears, frustration and shock
sweat, anger and numbness
working ‘round the clock
Tears runnin’ down leather faces
like the torrent down the creeks
weary, gaunt and hollow eyed
they haven’t rested in weeks
the maybes and the shoulda’s
the coulda’s and the might’s
will eat your innards like cancer
stay away from that fight
And now? What to do?
Where do you even start
to try and help the stockmen
who’s guts have been ripped apart?
rdennis Oct, 2013
You have a pretty amazing way with words…
Watch out Robert Frost, there’s a new kid in town. Great words about great tragedy!
Thank you both…
Wow! Powerful and full if feeling!
And I’m guessing from the gut!
heartfelt words
best wishes, rd: have sent you some google juice in this one.
What a great poem!
The sure is one that will pull at the heart strings. Well written.
What a pleasure it is to know you and have access to your incredible talent!
Thank you Frank, hope I can live up to that…
Well said:(